The still, silent night
is fading away
dawn is smiling
and promises day
a little tree yawns
and rustles its leaves
a gentle draught blows
and sweeps the streets
a lone highway truck
rumbles by
a trembling road
shudders and sighs
flaps in the wind
and chirps in the sky
the birds are waking up now
when will i
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Recycled Swan-song? :) It's nice this way too, only not as hard hitting.
ReplyDeleteAnd yes, happy new year! :)
Actually, this was the original :-) Swan-song happened when i was messing around with this one.
ReplyDeleteA very happy new year to you too!
-Amit
Yeah! I liked that version better too, kinda gory and twisted but yeah :P
ReplyDeleteI know - it's a bit like bun-maskaa after biryani, but yeah :-)
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